jago1996's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Karlach]

There we go. Sakimichan did a version of Karlach and she made her all babyfaced and honestly shit looking. Glad we can see her as she was intended to be while still having her in your own style. This does justice to Karlach and your own artistic touch.

AnkaEverlasting responds:

I appreciate your honesty and I appreciate your passion for the craft. However art can be loved by both creator and viewer alike. If Sakimichan enjoys creating in a particular way, and they enjoy creating for a particular audience, then it is just as valid. If you've created something new from the heart, then you've done it justice.

Empower, never undermine.

[Tankmen OC: Shawn McKinley-Valencia ~ 2022 ref sheet]

What a tragic soul.

AshtonHaz responds:

I know :'))

[Annie the Fugu Gal]

I saw your art thumbnails and at first was thinking they'd be cheap. but one closer inpection you have a really cute albiet simple style. It looks perfect for childrens entertainment. I bet if you develop this even further you will have 0 problem finding a comfy spot to leave a mark on the art world in some way.

CapnJ responds:

My overall drawing style is kinda simple, blend and friendly, true. But i'm glad to know that my style is very positive for everyone nowadays! And this means a lot to me-

Anyway thank you so much. I'm trying all the time. Trying to fit in!

[Star guardian Ahri]

Looking at this I can see that you paid attention and gave care to this piece. The pallete is harmonious. The textured stairway contrasts the smooth character allowing her to pop out without seeming out of place. The lighting of the scene lets the stairs show more depth to the image. There are spaces of very low detail that allow the main focal points to really shine. Overall great piece.

Her legs however are not foreshortened quite well and on closer inspection seem a bit distorted. Her fingers on her raised hand are not quite right either. Too long on the back end for the position they are in.

Keep it up.

Sashimisan responds:

thank you so much! it means so much that you comment and like my drawings :P especially such a long comment!

[Void With A Hand Of Cards]

This is clean but seems to lack any lasting effect on me aesthetically. I'd insist on toning down the background image to be as simple as the foreground. Sometimes this effect can work but I'm noticing the background more than the character.

OddyMcStrange responds:

Uh...what?

That's probably from the lighting effect I was going for. The high level of shading on Void needed a light source to cause it, and the background is supposed to be the light source. Besides, it's just a cartoon, it's not trying to be fancy or anything.

[Princess Peach Super crown Mario]

This is very uncomfortable to look at. That isn't why I voted half a star though. Some things can be revolting without being bad inherently.

This is just not the quality I like to see on NG and I hope you work on your process.

Kouta99 responds:

Hey I did rush this piece I Just didn’t have to finish it I might work and evolve the piece in the future but for now this is what I have done to it if you don’t like it feel free to check out some of my other work I have only been doing digital art for year + and I admit I’m still improving on some of the process everyone entitled to a opinion but if you still don’t make sense of this then I would like to see you do better

[Conker]

Why even post this?

Drag0nDaboss responds:

I Don't know? i didn't have my drawing tablet at the time and all i had was a mouse, I don't blame you for hating it. I'm working on a better version with my tablet this time so look forward to that:) I Appreciate the comment.

[Mutt and Chopps]

It's really not that bad. The designs are imaginative and interesting. The lineart is wobbly, and the forms are not anatomically accurate visually. The style look intentionally messy. But it doesn't work well in my opinion. The way the forms attach seem unnatural. like they are flattened and have no volume to them. Try constructing your pieces with more basic shapes.

The rat shines in this style because it gets to be pushed and have character to it. That's the best part of this image.

KloudKat responds:

Thanks for the feedback I'll do better next time.

[Ded Knight On Ded Horse]

Lol I really like this.

The style is detailed, The designs are interesting. The blank expressions are actually really charming. The image is a bit flattened in some parts. Hatching really does add depth in a few spots though.

The legs of the skelly are a bit stubby.

This aesthetic works well.

critterfitz responds:

Thanks, I'm working on getting better with anatomy.

[(request) Ready for Anything]

It's simple. It looks nice. Energetic for such a simple pose. It's a bit too simplified to be anything more than mildly interesting. Even the background is a bit bland. Something a would change about the character is how you designed the feet. They are far too simplified that they look silly. The rest of the body is basic but fits together. The feet seem misplaced here. It's cute. But it's not much more.

Tattorack responds:

Yeah, I have the same idea About this character, but it doesn't belong to me. I was simply requested to make his character look "cool", which I did as best as I could. Would you believe it if I told you the actual reference of the character was even blander than this?