jago1996's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tree Plantation]

I see a style in here. But it seems to be un refined. You got something cooking though. Bottom left panel the arm is too loose it just seems messed. Other notes are the text, it's a bit too stylized making it hard to see it all clearly. Not too hard just unnecessary.

Remember you need to reject the haters and the lovers to leave a healthy middle.

SeafoamPanda responds:

Man yeah I thought the text would be a bit hard to read. I have really messy hand writing so I gotta work on it. And thank you for your input on the style! Honestly I was sorta just experimenting with it so its not surprising to hear it seems a bit all over the place haha. I agree about the arm though so Ill work on that next time! This was sorta just some dumb thing I wanted to do quickly but I appreciate getting constructive critique like this, so thank you :D.

[deviltroll]

Great contrast and use of few points of saturation.

Totty responds:

thanks, really do need to work on values a llooottt more

[Just a Butt]

It is what it is it do what it do. I like this. The way you shaded doesn't seem consistent. But it is a good angle you just need to clean up the shading and coloring. I can see tons of coloring out of the lines. I suppose you could try and say it's a style, but I wouldn't recommend that. But all things considered, Nice butt.

DinkleBot responds:

thanks for the feedback

[Spidey]

This is great some might even say... Amazing.Although venom doesn't activate spidermans spidey senses, the symbiote was part of him once so it is undetectable.

shammiemaa responds:

Yeah I know that, but I kinda like it a little more that way ;P even though it doesnt make much sense

[cafe 02]

I like this. You should definitely explore more with this style.

Fubustu responds:

thanks will do :)

[Classroom - Late After School]

Wow. Some really great modelling here. Very calm setting. I notice the different table top colors (Nice detail). I think you should add a smudgy texture to the board so it looks more like a regular classroom board. (Like a markers been smudged in and isn't completely erased)

Lusin responds:

I'm glad you noticed the difference in the tables. I used different wood for some of the table tops and I really like your point the board. I'll do something about it.

Edit: I just wrote a bunch of stuff on the board. Kinda to give off that the classroom was used recently and some rambunctious students went a little nuts on it to leave a message to the teacher and/or the other students the next day because that is legit something I would do. God, I hate my stupid classmates.

[Mission Accomplished Jinx]

Wow. This is a very fetailed and pretty piece. You did good.

adeCANTO responds:

I tried my best to copy Riot's standards. If you see any other art piece I uploaded, my style is a lot simpler. :p But thanks!

[Watermelon quickie]

There's green in her blushies. Also I like the watermelon. The expressions pretty cute too.

ShrapnelAnime responds:

xD thanks and idk, I just threw stuff together since I wanted to get as many drawings done as I could

[ELIMINATOR]

Loving that sheen on the car. Also I like the attention to the background you gave. It really let's me appreciate the car more. Most people wouldn't think it to be that important until they see it without it.

z28ump responds:

Thanks man! Yeah, at first I hadn't intended on doing the full background, but it just felt empty with the car just floating there on the paper.

[tree]

I thiink this is good art. But I don't like it for some reason. It's beautiful, but for some reason I feel uneasy with it. Good job.

ZabuJard responds:

</3! :D